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7 Common Rsum Clichs to Avoid
Author: Dr. Sander I. MarcusWriting a rsum isnt easy. To your reader this one piece of paper is you, and he or she is going to give it about 20 seconds of attention (often less). Unfortunately, there are rsum traditions that seem to make sense but that ought to be questioned in todays tough job search world. One of those traditions is that certain words and phrases are considered basic necessities. They arent. There are many such clichs, but here is my list of 7 of the most common:
1. Responsible for Everyone is creditworthy for something on a job. And just because you are creditworthy for something doesnt mean that you are a creditworthy person. Simply erasing creditworthy for or responsibilities from your description usually strengthens it.
2. Assisted Descriptions starting with the word assisted are weak and non-specific. If all you do is render assistance, it places you in a lesser role. If you assisted the President of the company or the Manager of Marketing, what, specifically, did you actually do? What was your part of that job? Thats what to write.
3. Served as (or Acted as) This usually starts the description of a particular role or job function, such as Served as liaison to the Planning Committee. Eliminate served as and see how much stronger the writing is: Liaison to the Planning Committee.
4. Successfully It does NOT strengthen your description to say that you successfully accomplished something. Either you did it or you didnt do it. And if you were successful in one area, does it mean that you were unsuccessful in other areas you describe where you do not use that word?
5. Developed This word is non-specific and overused. What does developed really mean? Find a different word that is more specific to what you did.
6. Summary Every rsum IS a summary (Thats what the word means). If you have a summary section, then youve got a summary of a summary (which you probably also summarize in a cover letter). There are other options for this section (such as Objective, Strengths, Profile, or Skills).
7. Promoted Watch out for the word promoted. Often it is unclear what is meant without reading the context (which your reader does not have time for). Do you mean that you were promoted (or that you advanced) in your job title and responsibilities, or do you mean that you marketed and promoted the companys products? Find a different word. And in general, eliminate words that could have a double meaning.
Writing a rsum requires careful and precise thinking, writing, and editing. Every word counts. Do not take any word or phrase for granted.
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About the Author:Sander Marcus, Ph.D., is a Licensed Clinical Psychologist and Certified Professional Resume Writer in Chicago. He has over 3 decades of experience in providing career counseling, aptitude testing, job search coaching, and resume writing to tens of thousands of individuals. He is the co-author of 2 books on academic underachievement, various tests, and numerous articles. He can be contacted at marcus@iit.edu, 312-567-3358. http://www.center.iit.edu/careermotiv8.htm
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